Elation is like the bright orange color
that flows from the tip of a highlighter.
It sounds like the symphony
from a large flock of birds passing by.
It tastes like a sour candy
exploding on your tongue
and sizzling deep in your stomach.
It smells like a strong breath of cool fresh air
that sends tingles through your body.
It makes you want to jump to the moon
and run forever.
Elation is like an overwhelming joy
waiting to burst out into the world.
this is so good! you used your similies& metaphors perfeecttlyyy :) this makes me want to go and eat sour candy...
ReplyDeleteWow this reminds me of bacon! =P jk
ReplyDeleteIts really good i wish i could write like that
very vivid!!
ReplyDeleteWow! Great poem and cool topic! Elation definitely makes me want to jump to the moon!
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